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Post by sneasel on Jun 13, 2004 20:19:50 GMT
Here you go. The old one was getting glitchy with 14 pages...  |
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Post by V Faction on Jun 13, 2004 20:48:44 GMT
I saw the Shelltor back in the previous topic and I'm sorry to say that I don't like it.
Shelltor is a tortoise and the way you made it, it now looks like a dinosaur. The neck was too long, the shell was just wrong, and the shading was off.
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Post by tomer on Jun 13, 2004 20:54:30 GMT
thanks i fixed gatorock  and every body my last backs and minis are on my other subject on the 14 page so tell me if their ok |
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Post by earendurtelrunya on Jun 13, 2004 23:07:47 GMT
I tried sprucen up Shelltor for ya V, I shortened the neck, I donno if its enough though, andded better shading, and made the shell look like the front sprite:  Also I noticed that on the shell on the front sprite the whitest part is pure white, so I figured there were enough levels of shading on it already so I just turned all those place into the next darkest color. |
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Post by Shadolf on Jun 14, 2004 0:31:28 GMT
Every one of those mini sprites you have done already were done by their creators beforehand. Plus, they aren't really in the style of the normal minis. I think you should just stick to the back sprites. I still have to organize them
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Post by tomer on Jun 14, 2004 0:35:19 GMT
maybe but the problem is that there are few backs left to do and some of them i dont know if i am allowed to do
i am looking for something else to do
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Post by tomer on Jun 14, 2004 1:18:41 GMT
i fix this two shadows   |
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Post by V Faction on Jun 14, 2004 2:43:05 GMT
ET, good job. Just some minor patches but that's a big help. -That one spike near the front seems a little off. Maybe add a little more shell shalack so it doesn't appear to be falling off. -Thin up the connection between the head and neck. Basically, make the chin more prominent. -Add a brow to the eye. You can see it on the front sprite, its the > of a >  face. -That group of shell patterns in the middle.. They don't seem to have any shading on them. |
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Post by earendurtelrunya on Jun 14, 2004 3:26:36 GMT
 I fixed that one spike and thinned the neck up real easy, but I dono about the brow. I tried, and think it sortof looks like it, but I dono. Also I didnt really know how to add more shading to the middle set of shell patters, I was trying to mimic the front, but I think adding the shadow for that big spike helped. |
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Post by V Faction on Jun 14, 2004 3:46:23 GMT
Thank you very much.
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Post by ToTob on Jun 17, 2004 12:49:51 GMT
before you get mad
i made this new user because my last user was erased
first i got banned and now i am being erased
what am i suppose to do?
is there a way i can contact with somebody if it happens again?
because sometimes i get banned for days
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Post by ToTob on Jun 17, 2004 12:57:51 GMT
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Post by FMY on Jun 17, 2004 13:16:43 GMT
Yeah, pretty good backs. I think The first two need some more work. I couldn't do it better however.
Anyways, The flash art's great, but it should be posted in the artwork forum.
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Post by ToTob on Jun 17, 2004 13:48:54 GMT
oh sorry
i didn't know
i erased it and put it in the artwork
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Post by FMY on Jun 17, 2004 13:54:06 GMT
Hey, it doesn't matter. As long as you do it in the future.
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Post by ToTob on Jun 17, 2004 21:42:02 GMT
i don't know what fixing humird needs but i did sitrus again choose from these three    so what backs are there left to be done? or i finished? |
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Post by ToTob on Jun 17, 2004 22:13:33 GMT
FMY
are you updating the pokedex?
because there are a lot of backs that ET and i made
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Post by sneasel on Jun 18, 2004 3:17:36 GMT
I vote for the third Sitrus.
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Post by FMY on Jun 18, 2004 5:39:08 GMT
Yeah, me too. It's the same as the last one, but I like it most. Well, you don't need to change Humird. It looks good, but it just isn't one of your best backs.
EDIT: I'll add them as fast as I can.
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Post by ZeroCool on Jun 18, 2004 16:58:13 GMT
I vote for none, since you made its tail-leaves wrong. You put it right after the green part, but that's not the idea. The leaves are supposed to form its tail, and therefore should be placed more backwards. |
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Post by ToTob on Jun 19, 2004 0:07:58 GMT
FMY i noticed that some of the backs are missing so i will put them here these are only the ones that has fronts in the pokedex but theres alot of other backs  i did bronarl with eyes and mouth  and you should put this adumbrion  put only this petital  and put only this pumavine  and i am working on sitrus but its hard to make it fit if the tail statrs in the back i guess my smolderen is not good? |
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Post by ToTob on Jun 19, 2004 1:56:15 GMT
i fixed sitrus  |
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Post by FMY on Jun 19, 2004 6:19:22 GMT
Ok, I'll try to change it soon.
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Post by ToTob on Jun 19, 2004 12:17:58 GMT
FMY don't put this in the site  i did it but it wasn't good so i did the second one also put only the left one the right pic is the unfixed one  i fixed the tail and this one is the old one also i forgot to tell you that you didn't put this one  i'm not sure but i think the black background is not good because some of the sprites have black outlines so they looks weird with black background |
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Post by FMY on Jun 19, 2004 13:14:23 GMT
Oh, I liked the Sputteren like this. Actually I think it's better than the new one.I'll change it however, and I'll fix a white background for the sprites.
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