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Post by FMY on Jun 20, 2004 19:24:18 GMT
Hey, these look good. Some of your best ones.
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Post by ToTob on Jun 20, 2004 19:31:58 GMT
thanks FMY do you do also shading in sprites? maybe you can help?
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Post by FMY on Jun 20, 2004 19:36:30 GMT
To be honest, I've never done anything about spriting, but I could try.
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Post by BuffyBoy on Jun 20, 2004 21:57:19 GMT
i did scrawl and treadfast They could use some work the shading isn't very good. Treadfast is a circle not a whatever. Also that Ghost one with the sickle hands needs a lot of revamping.
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Post by ToTob on Jun 20, 2004 22:08:27 GMT
is this better?
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Post by earendurtelrunya on Jun 21, 2004 2:41:13 GMT
I did a revamp of ToTo's ghosts awhile ago as far as shading goes: The bottom ones are mine Here is my version of the ghosts that I did a long time ago when I joined and maybe the evo is done more to your liking BuffyBoy: Also I did the scrawl line when I joined, but everyone said there was no detail which I didnt know how to add and I still think they are rather bad, but I think treadfast's shape is better than ToTo's if he wants to add stuff or something: Hope this helps
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Post by V Faction on Jun 21, 2004 2:57:21 GMT
Ah, THOSE were the Scrawl/Treadfasts I was thinking of. Scrawl I'll be okay with, but Treadfast still looks like its front without any details. See, as you go down Treadfast's body, his body get's slightly slimmer. It's almost like a pear, though not as slim. Okay, about Sinciser. That hood in the back isn't connected to his robe. There's a little extra material that hangs back but that's it. You can kind of see it in Toto's illustration. The head is also detatched from its body, so in future Sinciser backs make this apparent. Gashper.. I like the very Bottom sprite's back, but I hate it's scythe. It's arm also appears to not have a shoulder. It's sort of just jutting out from the body. If you can fix up those problems, then it'll be acceptable. Maybe do up the curl some how too
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Post by earendurtelrunya on Jun 21, 2004 3:27:35 GMT
I'm re doing the shadings on the bird line: The other two are comming unless anyone has any objections. I think I know what you are talking about for treadfast and now I realize why ToTo's has the odd shape. I might look at that later. Wow, I would have never guessed that stuff about Sinciser, thanks for the info, I'll look at that one later also. You are talking about the gashper I did when I first joined correct? I too dont like how I did the arm and scythe. I remember having the problem too. In the end I just sorta put something there to make it complete and then ToTo came and made one that had an arm that looked like one so I didnt mess with it. I might do something like put ToTo's scythe on mine and try to do the arms something like his
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Post by ToTob on Jun 25, 2004 8:45:42 GMT
hey i am back i was banned for three days ok i did few things i looked at solomonds back and it just looked a little odd the ear wasn't in the right place and its head was to much on the side also the hand looks like it attached to the body and not a part of it the right one is mine also i fixed the smolderen i did and i think it looks better i did a shoulder so the hand wouldn't look weird and i fixed the head a lot the left one is the unfixed one the other to are fixed but i wasn't sure how long the snout soppuse to be so you can choose and i did yanma evo again i made it different and i made its wings longer oh and shadolf did you find the sprites? i dont get it my sinciser and gashper are not good after the revamping that ET did they look great, dont they?
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Post by V Faction on Jun 25, 2004 15:17:26 GMT
I'll take the Smolderen on the far right.
Actually, none of the Gashper/Sinciser backs are spot on. I'm waiting for a sort of unification of yours and ET's.
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Post by ToTob on Jun 25, 2004 20:38:58 GMT
ok which pokemon backs are left to do? this pokemon doesn't have backs: kitgriff tigriff letaligon crystal fish and its evo
which one of them can i do?
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Post by BuffyBoy on Jun 25, 2004 20:40:10 GMT
DIdn't CUddles do Kitgriff and Tigriff?
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Post by ToTob on Jun 25, 2004 20:48:13 GMT
really? i didn't see it can you put it here? oh and i noticed that smolderen dosen't fit it is too big so i had to cut the tail
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Post by BuffyBoy on Jun 25, 2004 20:55:44 GMT
Not sure where it is.. Perhaps you could have the tail cover some of the body....
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Post by ToTob on Jun 25, 2004 21:05:58 GMT
i tried but it would be too close to the body
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Post by Shadolf on Jun 25, 2004 21:30:40 GMT
All of those will be done by their original creators, as they have requested to do so themselves.
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Post by ToTob on Jun 25, 2004 21:33:06 GMT
ok no problem shadolf how are my sprites? and did you find the sprites that you said you already have?
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Post by Shadolf on Jun 25, 2004 21:37:57 GMT
Yes I found the Leviathan, but I was never able to post it. I might be able to tonight.
They are good, for the most part. Just a couple ones like V pointed out, his Gashper and Siniscer haven't been done totally on the spot yet.
And the Kaiyanma looks better shaped, but it's too big, about 6-8 pixels too big on both dimensions
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Post by ToTob on Jun 25, 2004 22:37:07 GMT
ok i made it smaller but i also fixed its eye and i added the thing on its mouth i tried my best doing smolderen with a tail so it could fit and shadolf you said you also have wyvenom and blizzaden and if cuddles did Kitgriff and Tigriff could you put it here Et said that he would work on sinciser and gashper so all there is left for me is to fix the shadows in some of the backs and i finished with backs? maybe i will continue with the artwork
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Post by Shadolf on Jun 25, 2004 22:48:19 GMT
Well I am checking around, and I thought I had...but I don't see any. But Wyvenom is Cuddles' Pokemon, and she prefers to do her own. So give her time, maybe she'll use yours, or maybe she will prefer to make her own when she makes the evo. Oh and here's Levi-whatever his new name is:
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Post by ToTob on Jun 25, 2004 23:04:24 GMT
i fixed it a little it's not alot but i fixed the outlines, the shadows a little and the mouth
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Post by Shadolf on Jun 25, 2004 23:15:19 GMT
Looks good.
Hopefully tonight I can get it all organized. I love that towards the end of my school year that all the stuff is finishing up. Now I have a lot more time to work on scripting and mapmaking.
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Post by ToTob on Jun 25, 2004 23:19:58 GMT
sorry that i am such a nag but still something isn't right its face is too thin i did this
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Post by ToTob on Jun 25, 2004 23:31:33 GMT
ok now for the shadows Et said he is working on gashper, sinciser, threadfast and scrawl these backs need shadows repairs i can understand why but what is wrong with these shadows?
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Post by V Faction on Jun 26, 2004 0:12:14 GMT
Bronarl and Brearl looks okay to me.
What happened to that Leviathan back sprite that looked like it was on the side?
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