Post by BonzaiRob on Jan 23, 2007 22:11:00 GMT
Cuddles sent me her beginning, but I realised there were bits missing.. like when you give your name and gender. So anyway, here's my version. The second half is Cuddles', although I've altered some parts to make the Rival sound more cheerful.
You start off asleep, it's all black
a voice (in a light, sort of yellowy font) says "Ah! At last! I have found one!"
"Long have I searched for one such as yourself. A human who is pure of heart, caring and gentle, but brave enough to do what is right..."
"Ah, I sense your mind searching. You are still dreaming, yes, but I have contacted you when your mind was most open."
"Who am I, you ask? I am known as.. the White One. I ask only for you to listen to my tale, but I need to know.. are you male or female?"
[you answer, the picture of the hero comes up]
"Ah, I see you have a clear image of yourself. yes... Please, what is your name?"
[you answer again]
"[name], thank you. Now please, just watch..."
I was thinking we could tell the start of the Albinos story here.. when it was created, or when it was sealed, or whatever happened to it. Anyway.
"Thank you for listening, [name]. I am in debt to you already, and yet I must still ask more! Please indulge me, for I have searched for many centuries to find someone... like you."
"I will contact you again.. that is, if you do not get to me first..."
Different, normal font: "Hey, wake up. We're there!"
[Black screen fades to reveal a small room with two beds. You're in one of them, and your rival (of opposite gender) is standing next to you.]
Rival: Aren't you a sleepy head! You should get ready, the ship's already stopped. Your mom's sorting out your luggage. I'll wait for you outside."
[The Rival leaves the room. You can look around now, but there's nothing very interesting. You can't use the Start menu yet. You go outside.]
Rival: Man, you really aren't good at waking up, are you? Your Mom's already got all your stuff off the ship! C'mon, let's go.
[S/he leads you off the ship.]
Rival: Ah, Maplewood, just the way I remembered! Let's hurry, Aunt Willow is expecting us!
[You can look around the port a bit, but there's nothing very interesting just yet. So you go South, into Maplewood.]
[Prof Willow is waiting for you just inside Maplewood. She does the ! bit.]
Prof Willow: Mark/Julia! And you must be [name]! Nice to see both of you! Mark/Julia, you'll be staying with me, but [name], you must come and see your new house!
[You follow the prof to one of the houses]
Prof Willow: Here we are! You should go inside, I'm sure you're eager to see your new room.
[You're sent in automatically. There are moving things around, like the Machoke/ Vigoroth and lots of crates. You can talk to your mom, or go up to your room. There's a potion in the PC.]
Mom: Hi [name], I was wondering when you'd turn up. Have you been exploring? Isn't it lovely here? Ican't wait to check out the shops! Don't worry about the packing, I'll be fine on my own. You go have fun with Mark/Julia!
[You go outside again. Willow and M/J aren't here any more; there are Aides all around the town.]
Assistant1: Prof Willow owns this town. She's very rich. I guess as her assistant I'll be rich, too some day.
Assistant2: I'm sure you know what a pokemon is already, but how much do you know about them?
Assistant3: Do you have a pokemon? You need to be aware of its strengths and weakness from its type. For example, fire type pokemon generally fears water type pokemon, but they can fight well against grass type pokemon.
Rival[in his/her house]: Isn't this great? Aunt Willow always has rooms for her guests, and they are always free!
[Prof Willow is standing at the exit to Route 56. You can either talk to her or try to walk past, but she'll stop you.]
Prof Willow: Are you leaving? It's quite dangerous outside of town. You'll need a pokemon with you.
Prof Willow: (!) Oh of course! That's what you two are here for isn't it? I'm so forgetful sometimes. Please come to my lab to select your starter pokemon.
[You're taken to the lab.]
Prof Willow: Before we proceed, do you want to know more about pokemon?
["Yes" and she's repeat what Prof Oak said in FR/LG, but the pokémon she holds should be a PT one]
Prof Willow: OK. I have 3 pokemon available right now. Please pick one that you like.
[Sputteren: This is Sputteren, a fire type pokemon. This pokemon's very playful, it should become your dearing companion in no time.]
[Petital: is Petital, a grass type pokemon. It's a very popular choice among young trainers among here. Don't you think it's adorable?]
[Dolphina: This is Dolphina, a water type pokemon. Its fighting ability might be hindered on land, but you should not underestimate it.]
Prof Willow[When you've chosen]: I trust you will treat each other kindly.
[Your rival rushes in]
Rival: Hey, that's not fair, [name] got his/her starter before me?
Prof Willow: Oh don't be like that. See here, I've still got 2 pokemon.
Rival: Oh, in that case I will pick [the one that is super effective against yours].
[Nothing happens till you try to leave:]
Rival: Hey, [name], why don't we have our first battle against each other?
[You battle, win or lose your pokémon has been healed afterwards]
Rival: Wasn't that fun?
Aaand I'll carry on later.
You start off asleep, it's all black
a voice (in a light, sort of yellowy font) says "Ah! At last! I have found one!"
"Long have I searched for one such as yourself. A human who is pure of heart, caring and gentle, but brave enough to do what is right..."
"Ah, I sense your mind searching. You are still dreaming, yes, but I have contacted you when your mind was most open."
"Who am I, you ask? I am known as.. the White One. I ask only for you to listen to my tale, but I need to know.. are you male or female?"
[you answer, the picture of the hero comes up]
"Ah, I see you have a clear image of yourself. yes... Please, what is your name?"
[you answer again]
"[name], thank you. Now please, just watch..."
I was thinking we could tell the start of the Albinos story here.. when it was created, or when it was sealed, or whatever happened to it. Anyway.
"Thank you for listening, [name]. I am in debt to you already, and yet I must still ask more! Please indulge me, for I have searched for many centuries to find someone... like you."
"I will contact you again.. that is, if you do not get to me first..."
Different, normal font: "Hey, wake up. We're there!"
[Black screen fades to reveal a small room with two beds. You're in one of them, and your rival (of opposite gender) is standing next to you.]
Rival: Aren't you a sleepy head! You should get ready, the ship's already stopped. Your mom's sorting out your luggage. I'll wait for you outside."
[The Rival leaves the room. You can look around now, but there's nothing very interesting. You can't use the Start menu yet. You go outside.]
Rival: Man, you really aren't good at waking up, are you? Your Mom's already got all your stuff off the ship! C'mon, let's go.
[S/he leads you off the ship.]
Rival: Ah, Maplewood, just the way I remembered! Let's hurry, Aunt Willow is expecting us!
[You can look around the port a bit, but there's nothing very interesting just yet. So you go South, into Maplewood.]
[Prof Willow is waiting for you just inside Maplewood. She does the ! bit.]
Prof Willow: Mark/Julia! And you must be [name]! Nice to see both of you! Mark/Julia, you'll be staying with me, but [name], you must come and see your new house!
[You follow the prof to one of the houses]
Prof Willow: Here we are! You should go inside, I'm sure you're eager to see your new room.
[You're sent in automatically. There are moving things around, like the Machoke/ Vigoroth and lots of crates. You can talk to your mom, or go up to your room. There's a potion in the PC.]
Mom: Hi [name], I was wondering when you'd turn up. Have you been exploring? Isn't it lovely here? Ican't wait to check out the shops! Don't worry about the packing, I'll be fine on my own. You go have fun with Mark/Julia!
[You go outside again. Willow and M/J aren't here any more; there are Aides all around the town.]
Assistant1: Prof Willow owns this town. She's very rich. I guess as her assistant I'll be rich, too some day.
Assistant2: I'm sure you know what a pokemon is already, but how much do you know about them?
Assistant3: Do you have a pokemon? You need to be aware of its strengths and weakness from its type. For example, fire type pokemon generally fears water type pokemon, but they can fight well against grass type pokemon.
Rival[in his/her house]: Isn't this great? Aunt Willow always has rooms for her guests, and they are always free!
[Prof Willow is standing at the exit to Route 56. You can either talk to her or try to walk past, but she'll stop you.]
Prof Willow: Are you leaving? It's quite dangerous outside of town. You'll need a pokemon with you.
Prof Willow: (!) Oh of course! That's what you two are here for isn't it? I'm so forgetful sometimes. Please come to my lab to select your starter pokemon.
[You're taken to the lab.]
Prof Willow: Before we proceed, do you want to know more about pokemon?
["Yes" and she's repeat what Prof Oak said in FR/LG, but the pokémon she holds should be a PT one]
Prof Willow: OK. I have 3 pokemon available right now. Please pick one that you like.
[Sputteren: This is Sputteren, a fire type pokemon. This pokemon's very playful, it should become your dearing companion in no time.]
[Petital: is Petital, a grass type pokemon. It's a very popular choice among young trainers among here. Don't you think it's adorable?]
[Dolphina: This is Dolphina, a water type pokemon. Its fighting ability might be hindered on land, but you should not underestimate it.]
Prof Willow[When you've chosen]: I trust you will treat each other kindly.
[Your rival rushes in]
Rival: Hey, that's not fair, [name] got his/her starter before me?
Prof Willow: Oh don't be like that. See here, I've still got 2 pokemon.
Rival: Oh, in that case I will pick [the one that is super effective against yours].
[Nothing happens till you try to leave:]
Rival: Hey, [name], why don't we have our first battle against each other?
[You battle, win or lose your pokémon has been healed afterwards]
Rival: Wasn't that fun?
Aaand I'll carry on later.
