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Post by tomer on Jun 3, 2004 22:22:49 GMT
hey it is me ToTo i was banned again for three days and i dont know how but now i was able to open a new account so i wont be banned again it is good to be back well in the last few days i did lots of stuff!!! i did a lot of back sprites but i wasnt able to show them first i repaired velozila i repaired aurosar hand i finished the sputteren line baskkion adumbrion thandraik toxator reirei tangela evo grass_ice gourdsem gatorock tsuneko psymond tabiki
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Post by tomer on Jun 3, 2004 22:29:36 GMT
and i changed the location of some pics so here and for another subject are you doing an evo for wyvenom? becaouse i drew somthing and i think it could good as an evo i did it in different formes so you can choose
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Post by tomer on Jun 3, 2004 22:36:09 GMT
also i know you dont need new pokemon but i drew some things that looks good all i did was backs and i really want to donate to the front section i did a machine type you can choose one of these and its evo also i drew this i would realy like you to accept some of them if you want i am ready to do all the job footprints names and stats please
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Post by mattgcn on Jun 3, 2004 22:38:20 GMT
I like the fishy. And #2 looks like Meta Ridley.
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Post by tomer on Jun 3, 2004 22:40:08 GMT
and what do you think about the backs and wyvenom evo?
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Post by tomer on Jun 4, 2004 0:07:19 GMT
i did purroot
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Post by earendurtelrunya on Jun 4, 2004 2:06:18 GMT
Waring--long post wow, you have been buisy! Good job on all of them. Although I dont think you are quite there with all of them. A lot of them still need to be cleaned up and proportioned better, but they are still good, and good enough to make those fixes fairly easily. I cant really what your last Velozila sprite looked like, but I like this one and dont think that anything else needs to be done with that. I dont really see anything wrong with Aurosar I think that some how Seetheren looks a little too streched out or something. I cant really tell whats doing it, but i think if the head was a little bit thicker/taller it would be alright. For Smolderen, good sprite, but something about it just seems to make it not look like Smolderen. I think again the head is to streched out and needs to be taller and just over all bigger because the head looks too small for the body. Baskkion is a bit on the odder side, and I know from also trying to do the back, that its not easy. The five little bumps/horns comming off the head need to be curved around the head more, not as flat across. Also I think the hands need to be thinner especially the right one. Plus the head looks too big for the body, which, you cant really tell what it is doing. On Adumbrion, the hans/fingers again need to be thiner so that there is space between them. The head seems the be about the right size compared to the body, but I think the two ear flap things or whatever should come up next to the point thing at a lesser angle than you have. Plus i dont really know how to explain this, but on the front sprite it doesnt really look like the bottom of the eyes touch anything and the purple parts dont meet. I dono. I think Thundraik is well done exept the neck could stand to be a tiny but thinner and possibly longer(wings look further down on front sprite) I think Toxator is looking up too high, it needs to be a lesser angle. It also seems too smoothe, it needs to be rougher and the nose needs to be more curved at the end instead of squared. Also it looks sorta like the green scales are comming up onto the head on yours and in the front it looks like they are going away from the head. Reirei looks alright I guess, exept the head looks too streached out again. I dont think it needs to be taller, but the snout needs to be brought in closer to where the ears start. Tangela evo is good, but bigger head or thinner/smaller body and possibly more vines, or maybe they just need to be thinner and more wild (spread out) The grass ice looks ok exept the line of green going up over the head looks too like cut out or strait, not natural. And your snow looks more like poka dots than snow (it is suposed to be snow right? ) Good job on Gourdsem, I think it looks just like the front sprite! Gatorock has the same looking too high problem as Toxator. Plus his head looks too streched out. Shorten his snout a bit and possibly a wee bit from his tail. Tsuneko looks very good to me! Psymond: too fat. his crystal on his tail is almost as thick as his stomach on the front sprite. Make the crystal a little bit bigger, lop off about 100 pounds (a little from the head too) and he will be good. Tabiki looks good to me exept put a little more fire onto that fire on his head, and make that fire there look more like fire and not a horn and it will be good. For Fouwler, I like the version ZeroCool put on the updated images better, even though neither of them really have the right beak. this one is too odd, the bend needs to come sooner and like other people have said it needs to be more feathery down the neck. Bronarl: Thanks for adding the eye and mouth. I dont really know whats happening with Lazardous, but if I remember correctly, a log time ago people were saying that cuddles was doing it, so we could see it anyday now with all her other sprites she just made. But of yours I like the bottom middle one best. I like your made up sprites especially the fish one Purroot looks nicely done, exept make the two leaves around the neck bigger. Ok i'll shut up now that I cant type any more and am getting hungry. I really like all your sprites, this is just some constructive critisism and my two cents.
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Post by sneasel on Jun 4, 2004 2:33:09 GMT
And could you lower Psymond's arms? I dunno, I think he'd look better with them hanging down.
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Post by tomer on Jun 4, 2004 7:58:10 GMT
wow ET first of all thanks for the info i thought that some of them need adjustments too i was wondering if you could help me fix them because theres a lot to fix i tried to fix toxator but i dont know how to do the shadows on the top of its head maybe you could fix gatorock and toxator?
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Post by remi = þånÐå on Jun 4, 2004 9:43:32 GMT
You are so good at those back sprites keep m coming great work toto. ;D
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Post by tomer on Jun 4, 2004 9:47:28 GMT
thanks i noticed something zerocool put in the new pokedex this i fixed it because the horn wasnt good
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Post by ZeroCool on Jun 4, 2004 16:50:17 GMT
Cuddles is doing Lazardous BTW Smolderen doesn't have a flame at the end of its tail. It maybe look like that on the front sprite, but it's actually a overloaded flame casting itself over the tip of the tail. Just so you know
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Post by earendurtelrunya on Jun 4, 2004 20:55:45 GMT
Nice improvement on Seakidna there. And sure, I'll try to help you fix some of these up.
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Post by tomer on Jun 5, 2004 0:35:15 GMT
ok i fix some of them i made Seetheren neck longer and i changed its cheek so its head wouls look bigger same for smolderen but i did it with and without fire in its tail i know it not suppose to have fire in its tail but i think it looks better this way i fixed psymond (he had a diet ;D) i made thundraik neck longer and thiner baskkion i fixed adumbrion but i did it with a pointy mouth and without i dont know wich one is better i also did reirei twice because i didnt know wich one is better tabiki i made the tangela evo hair more wild i hope that you do gatorock and toxator and maybe you could you my dinosaur as a new pokemon i really want to do at least one new pokemon
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Post by earendurtelrunya on Jun 5, 2004 2:18:04 GMT
Ok, from just looking at these sprites and not doing any kind of side by side comparisons, I have to say a lot of those have great revisions and already look a lot better! Seetheren looks better Smolderen is a bit better, but I still think his head should be taller. Psymond looks a lot better, good job. maybe just a few more tweeks(i dono what yet i have to compare sprites) Thundraik looks good Baskkion looks a little better, still same sorta stuff as before though Adumbrion is very well done now. I like the 1st one better, and the only think I see weird on it right off the bat is the face area, although i dont know how to fix it. The 1st reirei is better, and I think it looks really nice I cant really tell a difference in tabiki from remembering your old one, but I'm sure its a little better. Tangela evo looks good, not much else to say I'll try the gatorock and toxator, but I cant promise anything. Sometimes I get lucky and come out with a good sprite, but a lot of the time I cant make it look right. So i'll try...
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Post by sneasel on Jun 5, 2004 2:36:04 GMT
I still dunno about Psymond... There's something about it that bugs me... But Seethern looks awesome!
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Post by Freckles23 on Jun 5, 2004 2:43:13 GMT
I really like the new version or Sitrus. It's much cuter and is more like Tropius. Could I use it as my avatar, or possibly in my siggy at Serebii?
The back sprites are coming along well.
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Post by ZeroCool on Jun 5, 2004 8:10:20 GMT
Sure u can, Freckles. Just give ToTo and me enough credit for spriting and designing! ;D
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Post by BuffyBoy on Jun 5, 2004 13:33:42 GMT
I think that these all need some work
Final Fire Evo (I still have trouble with the name) Baskkion Toxator Grass-Ice Psymond-NEEDS THE MOST
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Post by ZeroCool on Jun 5, 2004 14:15:32 GMT
U don't like Smolderen?
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Post by V Faction on Jun 5, 2004 15:12:54 GMT
I don't like it either. Like ET says, there's just something about it that doesn't seem right. It almost looks like a Muppet. Toto, you need to work on the crest, the shoulder, the fingers, the snout, the teeth, and the tail.
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Post by ZeroCool on Jun 5, 2004 15:18:51 GMT
BB doesn't like Smolderen's name, he said. I don't really like Smolderen's backsprite either. Anyways, I looked through my favorite pokés and I saw Kanninaids back. But something bugged me about his fingers. So I fixed them: They look more at their place now, I think. EDIT: I thought from the first time I read it, and I still think the name Smolderen ROCKES!
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Post by V Faction on Jun 6, 2004 15:12:13 GMT
Well, no offense to BB, but it isn't getting changed. People can dislike it all they want.
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Post by tomer on Jun 6, 2004 19:55:35 GMT
ok ET maybe you could help me because i cant fix these backs the grass ice pokemon needs fixing i did the snow on his back better but still it nedds fixing i fix toxator but still the shadows are no good and maybe you can fix smolderen and baskkion you have the bases all it needs is your finishing touch and into another subject i fixed gatorock and i think it looks ok and i fixed psymond again and i finished the petital line i did petital leaves in two colors i fixed purroot (i fixed the shadows, ears, leaves and i added a tail) and i did pumavine but then i realized that it lokks too much like the tsukano i made so i did it again i dont know what you prefer and i have a question i believe that i saw that somebody did scrawl and treadfast did you accept it or we need to do it again? by the way i was banned again in my new user what am i suppose to do? it bans me all the time sometime it bans me for days
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Post by tomer on Jun 6, 2004 20:11:55 GMT
i did another thing i noticed that the ball on brearl tail that ET did dosen't look like it attached to the tail it looks like it is on the tail so i fixed it a little my fix is the left one i dont know if it realy matters but still
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